Really! Feeling so sad for both of you (Natasha and Deepa)… Your stories are awesome, truly, they deserve to be published. Don’t know why they held it!
@anaya-hii dear.emotional but awesome episode!!! sana’s painful story is also nice. continue it 🙂 hope they will reach soon their bus trip safely n joins their friends…
@deepa- hey, omg its sooo romantic scene between ardhika 🙂 🙂 😉 they spend their time together with lots of love!!!! awesome dear keep going on. eagerly waiting for next episode ¡¡¡
♡♡♡♥♥♥ 🙂
Episode 9
The scene is the hotel room where our 3 sp & 3 ma are sound asleep.
Parth woke up in the middle of the night as he felt thirsty. He drank water & then was about to sleep again when his eyes just searched for Sana, and she was nowhere to be seen. He rubbed his eyes to make sure he wasn’t just being sleepy head and imagining. He became sure that Sana was missing. First, he thought of awakening others. But then, he thought maybe not. What if she just went to the washroom or something. So, he decided to check it himself first . He checked for her in the washroom, and the corridor. She was nowhere. He was about to call Ansh when he was a shadow behind the balcony. He went there & saw that she stood there. All the more gorgeous with the moonlight adding to her smooth velvety skin, a silver coating. The breeze feather touching her smooth silky hair. He stood there admiring for a few minutes.
On the other hand, Sana, she was lost in her thoughts. FB shows that she had a dream about a guy & herself being on an island. They were looking into each other’s eyes. He leaned closer & was one breath away from her . They were about to kiss & just then she saw his face. It was Parth!!!!!! She woke up from her sleep. And here she was….
Sana (thinking in her mind): am I worth anyone’s love after what I did? Maybe he is just being nice as he came to know that I was an orphan. Why does my heart stops beating when he looks into my eyes. Why I nowadays feel so safe when he is around? I am not worth all this. May be God is doing all this to punish me more for what I did. I should keep myself away from him. I have no right for any love. I am a killer. I am to be punished & not loved.
She was so lost in her thoughts that she didn’t notice him standing right beside her & watching her so closely. She noticed him when he cleared his throat to drag her out of her thoughts.
Parth:”Isn’t it too cold outside? Why are you awake this late?”
Sana( I should stop doing this to me. I will just leave from here & go to sleep)
Parth saw that she had tears fighting to over flow from her eyes & she was fighting them back when she saw him.
Sana: “ I just came by to get some fresh air. I was about to go to sleep. Ok then. Goodnight”
She started to go inside, when all of a sudden he pulled her catching her left elbow and brought her near him. He then framed his palms on her face.
Parth: :” look into my eyes Sana”. He brought her chin up so as to make her look into his eyes. She lowered her gaze.
Parth: “Sana. Please don’t do this. I want to know what is bothering you. I just want to know what is ripping you apart inside. I want to be a friend to whom you can share all your fears. I want to be a friend. Don’t I even deserve to be a friend . Am I that bad?”
Sana: “trust me Parth. You don’t want to know them. “
Parth: “Sana please. I want to”
Sana : “ok. I think this will help you to run far away from me. I will tell you the truth. “
Sana moved back from Parth. Parth was still watching her closely.
Sana: ”I was just 9 years old when I was the happiest girl in the world. I had a lovely family. My dad, mom, and Chintu -my younger brother. One day we were all heading back home after a trip to lonawla and on the way a jeep was trying to overtake us. Dad gave way for the jeep. They crossed us & I felt so bad. I started to force my dad to drive fast & to defeat the jeep in race. I cheered him. Mom told dad to drive slowly, but I insisted him to keep the pace. Soon that happened. A truck came in the opposite direction & there was a huge bang… I woke up in city hospital & I had to face the worst reality of my life.(Sana’s eyes poured out tears as if from a tap. But she continued). I had got my family killed in the accident.
Sana began sobbing uncontrollably . All of a sudden Parth scooped her in his embrace & hugged her hard and she dug deep into his chest while crying with all those images coming back to her with 10 fold intensity.
i really like your work anaya and i was missing u frm so many days……ur story is lovely and a seriel can ba made on it….keep writing and keep updating us!!!
I used to write in mmz page of tellyupdates
They stopped it & i started writing here. For TU, I am not able to get the page to provide them with my story to publish. SO I am writing nowhere else.now its just here.
starts with arjun removing his shirt and lies next to radhika….he stares her from head to toe with his burning eyes….he then carasses her hair and face which leave rads to close her eyes he then carasses her lips…rads gets up with a shock she s totally affected by his seductive touch……she gets down from bed and walks few steps away…arjun follows her,comes and stand in front of rads….arjun lifts rads chin too make her look at him….both stare eachother…..rads unable to hide her feeling move away from him…just then arjun caught hold of her dupatta and flew it away from her…rads gets shy and keep her hand across her front she s breathing heavily….arjun approach her,took away her hand in his and back hugs her,rads feel his body heat on her….her hairs is flying over his face….makes arjun to go more and more crazy….rads somehow escape from his grip and trie to walk away,arjun holds her hand and pull her more forcely towrds him,she fell into his strong arms,arjun din leave her chance to escape and hugs her more and more tightly,his bare body is touching hers,rads has her hands clutching hard to his back.
Scene2
Arjun hugging rads tightly,he releases her from his brutal hug,rads is totally lost by his everything,he again carries rads to bed and puts her down,he too lies by her side,he took t rose from the vase and start to touch her whole body with rose,rads is shivering,he comes closs to kiss her lips….bt rads get up.
Scene3
Rads gets up,arjun holds her from leaving,she has her back turned to him,arjun gathers her long hair to one side and untie her dress knot,he touches her bare back and kisses it,rads close her eye and clutch hard to bed…he pulls rads under him and start to kiss her eye,forehead.cheeks.nose and ear vigourously.
@kfar: Hi! I am dying for your story. Can you do me a favour??? Please post your story here too….. Please….. And yeah, server still isn’t working in TU… Did you see how many comments you got on that pg??? Amazing….
sorry yar…yesterdy i could not update episode due to my mob,it get struck and switched of dr bleady mob,,,2dy till nw its working yaar…..vll try to update as soon as possible buddy….love alots dr…tc
Starts with arjun and radhika reaching farm house….arjun gets down frm his car and ask radhika to get down,bt radhika tells no,pls drop me in clg….arjun holds her hand and takes her out and lifts her in his arms and takes her inside….arjun put radhika down and ask her to take rest for sometime…..afttat v wll practice….radhika tells no,i cant stay here,,,drop me in clg,,,,orelse i will go by myself and start to walk towards the door,bt arjun locks the door and start to walk toward rads making her to fall on couch….arjun locks her arm around her and tells that….. U wont go anywhere till u dance properly…. Do u understand it babe….arjun goes to attend t call
Radhika is left thinking
Affsometime,arjun ask radhika to come upstairs,she goes and asusual they practice dance and they come closer to eachother….
arjun and radhika keeps on practicing,they forgot tat night has arrived….suddenly the power goesoff…just when,radhika and arjun came back to their world and realised it was ni8…arjun ask rads to wait and goes to get candles…..radhika gets scared due to dark….
Scene2
arjun brings candles and lights the whole room,radhika too helps him,both stare eachother and lights the room.it start to rain,radhika goes to balcony to enjy rain,arjun followe her to balcony and is mesmerised to c his love playing in rain,arjun cant able to take off his eyes frm her,he stares her like anything….and start to walk towards her.
Scene3
arjun touches rads shoulder,radhika turns and see him,there is a thunder,rads gets afraid and hugs him tightly…..arjuns hormones are terribly increasing…..rads breaks the hug and looks at him…his sexy eyes and hot breath make her to shiver and lose her senses.
Rads tries to ignore him and leave,arjun holds her hand pulls her towards him and lifts her,he carries her to bed,and put her in bes,he removes his shirt and looks at her.TERE MERE SONG PLAY IN BG.
Deepa wht to say yaarrr…u hav marvelous skill of writing…became fan of yours….wht a story!! aradhika romance on high level…love ech n evry part….superbbbbbb…muhhhaa…
675 Comments
Samiha
September 15, 11:16@kfar: Please continue your story here also yaar! Please!!!
@Anaya: Hey! Where did you disappear leaving us all in intense mode??? Come back soon and post your story dear…..
@Natasha: Keep trying, they will publish your story. And please continue here also from where you left off in TU…..
NISHA
September 15, 08:07Will somebody, deepa strawberry and all mmz fans
Tell me where are ananya. She started writing her story .
But now doesn’t know
where she gone
So many stories poems etc started in mmz tu page.
Now doesn’t know when we will gather under one roof.
If possible. Please let me also know please.
Love you all mmz. fans. :):):)
strawberry
September 15, 08:29Even I don’t know where is she???
NISHA
September 15, 07:41Hey deepa,
Don’t worry, we all are mmz fans and all loved and praise each other writing always.
I mean this is our mmz.
And liked each other writing and always ready to help you and
always loving each other writing and commenting skills.
Just usual this song comes to my mind. Just writing for fun
“Aji rooth kar tum Kahan Jayega
Jahan Jayega hume payegaa.”
Its an old song just comes to my mind when i thought about all mmz fans.
Doesn’t matter any site closed or any other ways closed , we find a way to reconnect to each other.
Because we are bonded with each other manmarziyan.
Love you all. And keep sharing your beautiful thoughts.
“
Deepa
September 15, 07:47Hey nisha
can u translate tat two lines in eng yaar,bcos i dont knw hindi yaar….
Sure yaar vll stay connected always dr
love u buddy
NISHA
September 15, 07:54If you will become angry , then where else you go .
You go anywhere we will be always there.
Not exactly but yes this is the meaning of that song .
Love you dear. Keep writing
‘
strawberry
September 15, 07:40i just loved everyone”s stories
btw @anaya…..seeing u after a long time….waiting for your next epi
Natasha
September 15, 06:27Feeling very sad. I had write my story to tu on their contect us page but they are not publishing it.
Deepa
September 15, 06:39S natty even me too tired….bt they not publishing yaar
Samiha
September 15, 06:43Really! Feeling so sad for both of you (Natasha and Deepa)… Your stories are awesome, truly, they deserve to be published. Don’t know why they held it!
NISHA
September 15, 07:19hey, deepa, nothing to worry. Soon they also realize that your story is full worthy to publish.
When all tu fans request them to publish your story.
As we all like and praise your writing .
Dear , please till than pls continue your story here.
Don’t forget that you have fans of your story who eagerly wait for the next episodes.
Love you dear. Lots of love.
zara
September 15, 05:59@anaya-hii dear.emotional but awesome episode!!! sana’s painful story is also nice. continue it 🙂 hope they will reach soon their bus trip safely n joins their friends…
@deepa- hey, omg its sooo romantic scene between ardhika 🙂 🙂 😉 they spend their time together with lots of love!!!! awesome dear keep going on. eagerly waiting for next episode ¡¡¡
♡♡♡♥♥♥ 🙂
anaya
September 15, 04:39Episode 9
The scene is the hotel room where our 3 sp & 3 ma are sound asleep.
Parth woke up in the middle of the night as he felt thirsty. He drank water & then was about to sleep again when his eyes just searched for Sana, and she was nowhere to be seen. He rubbed his eyes to make sure he wasn’t just being sleepy head and imagining. He became sure that Sana was missing. First, he thought of awakening others. But then, he thought maybe not. What if she just went to the washroom or something. So, he decided to check it himself first . He checked for her in the washroom, and the corridor. She was nowhere. He was about to call Ansh when he was a shadow behind the balcony. He went there & saw that she stood there. All the more gorgeous with the moonlight adding to her smooth velvety skin, a silver coating. The breeze feather touching her smooth silky hair. He stood there admiring for a few minutes.
On the other hand, Sana, she was lost in her thoughts. FB shows that she had a dream about a guy & herself being on an island. They were looking into each other’s eyes. He leaned closer & was one breath away from her . They were about to kiss & just then she saw his face. It was Parth!!!!!! She woke up from her sleep. And here she was….
Sana (thinking in her mind): am I worth anyone’s love after what I did? Maybe he is just being nice as he came to know that I was an orphan. Why does my heart stops beating when he looks into my eyes. Why I nowadays feel so safe when he is around? I am not worth all this. May be God is doing all this to punish me more for what I did. I should keep myself away from him. I have no right for any love. I am a killer. I am to be punished & not loved.
She was so lost in her thoughts that she didn’t notice him standing right beside her & watching her so closely. She noticed him when he cleared his throat to drag her out of her thoughts.
Parth:”Isn’t it too cold outside? Why are you awake this late?”
Sana( I should stop doing this to me. I will just leave from here & go to sleep)
Parth saw that she had tears fighting to over flow from her eyes & she was fighting them back when she saw him.
Sana: “ I just came by to get some fresh air. I was about to go to sleep. Ok then. Goodnight”
She started to go inside, when all of a sudden he pulled her catching her left elbow and brought her near him. He then framed his palms on her face.
Parth: :” look into my eyes Sana”. He brought her chin up so as to make her look into his eyes. She lowered her gaze.
Parth: “Sana. Please don’t do this. I want to know what is bothering you. I just want to know what is ripping you apart inside. I want to be a friend to whom you can share all your fears. I want to be a friend. Don’t I even deserve to be a friend . Am I that bad?”
Sana: “trust me Parth. You don’t want to know them. “
Parth: “Sana please. I want to”
Sana : “ok. I think this will help you to run far away from me. I will tell you the truth. “
Sana moved back from Parth. Parth was still watching her closely.
Sana: ”I was just 9 years old when I was the happiest girl in the world. I had a lovely family. My dad, mom, and Chintu -my younger brother. One day we were all heading back home after a trip to lonawla and on the way a jeep was trying to overtake us. Dad gave way for the jeep. They crossed us & I felt so bad. I started to force my dad to drive fast & to defeat the jeep in race. I cheered him. Mom told dad to drive slowly, but I insisted him to keep the pace. Soon that happened. A truck came in the opposite direction & there was a huge bang… I woke up in city hospital & I had to face the worst reality of my life.(Sana’s eyes poured out tears as if from a tap. But she continued). I had got my family killed in the accident.
Sana began sobbing uncontrollably . All of a sudden Parth scooped her in his embrace & hugged her hard and she dug deep into his chest while crying with all those images coming back to her with 10 fold intensity.
Deepa
September 15, 04:48Hi anaya,,,
nice epi yaar…loved it……enjoyed the part wer parth req sana to share her pain and to regard him as a friend……very awesome yaar
NISHA
September 15, 05:43Hey, ananya , I really liked your story.
Keep continuing writing . But tell me where else you update the story.
I read it from the beginning . And reading the story in half . Really don’t like .
Please tell where else you write and complete your story.
Samiha
September 15, 05:49Hi Anaya! Glad that you’re here too. Why don’t you post your story on TU??? Everybody would like it…..
strawberry
September 15, 07:31i really like your work anaya and i was missing u frm so many days……ur story is lovely and a seriel can ba made on it….keep writing and keep updating us!!!
Yours,
strawberry
anaya
September 18, 08:17I used to write in mmz page of tellyupdates
They stopped it & i started writing here. For TU, I am not able to get the page to provide them with my story to publish. SO I am writing nowhere else.now its just here.
Dipika
September 15, 04:30hey Deepa post ur story on tellyupdate dear..thena n far also posting der…plz come there….
Deepa
September 15, 04:39Hey dipika,vll post aft some time dr…nw busy….
Deepa
September 15, 06:03Hey dipika can u give me the link….yaar
Deepa
September 15, 04:26Epi 17
starts with arjun removing his shirt and lies next to radhika….he stares her from head to toe with his burning eyes….he then carasses her hair and face which leave rads to close her eyes he then carasses her lips…rads gets up with a shock she s totally affected by his seductive touch……she gets down from bed and walks few steps away…arjun follows her,comes and stand in front of rads….arjun lifts rads chin too make her look at him….both stare eachother…..rads unable to hide her feeling move away from him…just then arjun caught hold of her dupatta and flew it away from her…rads gets shy and keep her hand across her front she s breathing heavily….arjun approach her,took away her hand in his and back hugs her,rads feel his body heat on her….her hairs is flying over his face….makes arjun to go more and more crazy….rads somehow escape from his grip and trie to walk away,arjun holds her hand and pull her more forcely towrds him,she fell into his strong arms,arjun din leave her chance to escape and hugs her more and more tightly,his bare body is touching hers,rads has her hands clutching hard to his back.
Scene2
Arjun hugging rads tightly,he releases her from his brutal hug,rads is totally lost by his everything,he again carries rads to bed and puts her down,he too lies by her side,he took t rose from the vase and start to touch her whole body with rose,rads is shivering,he comes closs to kiss her lips….bt rads get up.
Scene3
Rads gets up,arjun holds her from leaving,she has her back turned to him,arjun gathers her long hair to one side and untie her dress knot,he touches her bare back and kisses it,rads close her eye and clutch hard to bed…he pulls rads under him and start to kiss her eye,forehead.cheeks.nose and ear vigourously.
ends
precap
Arjun leaves rads…seeing her uncomfy
strawberry
September 15, 07:29lovely and romantic…..u rock deepa!!!
kanishka
September 15, 04:24@kfar I m happy for u can u tell me ur story of tu is next part or first chapter from starting.
strawberry
September 15, 04:23@deepa please post your story here or in telly updates……Dont leave us in suspense……:happy:
nisha
September 15, 01:12Hey, kfar really loved your stories.
I am a regular reader of all your stories.
You started writing 2 stories. but after the page closed you just wrote one story that to in a short time of intervals.
Please tell me where all mmz fans gather and share their stories.
nisha
September 15, 01:15Hey, anybody is here,
Deepa , anu , ananya, samiha, strawberry really like to be a part of you all.
I am a fan of mmz and reading your stories and comments is always a mind pleasing experience.
Loved to be a part of you all. :):):)
strawberry
September 15, 04:25in tu, they have opened a page where any one can write their stories….ever1 is posting their stories there only
Deepa
September 15, 07:29Thank u somuch nisha…for loving my story
Deepa
September 15, 07:59Nice yaar…..:)
Samiha
September 15, 00:14If it gets deleted, then write in short parts… But please write. And tell me a time when you can regularly come here….
kfar
September 15, 00:22Yes, I will try though, I’m gone after 10 in the morning and I can only post the story in the evning, busy days, I can come and comment yeah 😀
feels good that I hv a story page n thena n anu have der own dats really cool too 😀
Samiha
September 15, 00:10Anyone here??? Deepa, Mitty, Dipika, Swar, Clara, Zara, Mandy, Strawberry, other TU friends??? Anyone???
Deepa
September 15, 03:05Hi samiha am here dr
Samiha
September 15, 00:09Anyone here??? Deepa, Mitty, Strawberry, other TU friends??? Anyone???
strawberry
September 15, 02:39yup….im here
Samiha
September 15, 00:05@kfar: Hi! I am dying for your story. Can you do me a favour??? Please post your story here too….. Please….. And yeah, server still isn’t working in TU… Did you see how many comments you got on that pg??? Amazing….
kfar
September 15, 00:09Hi, Samiha deary good morning!!!
yeah here everytime I try to post some adds come in the middle and whatever I write just gets deleted :/
Hey I don’t know yaar, how many did I get?!?!? excited to know?
Samiha
September 15, 00:12Good Morning!! How is everything??? You must be feeling quite good that you have your own story page and people are commenting on it….
kfar
September 14, 23:11hahaha did we mmz guys crash the server der?
kfar
September 14, 23:25Im bored anyone here to talk?
Kruti
September 14, 23:51Yup…the server is still down 🙁 didn’t get a chance to read ur story tr…
strawberry
September 14, 23:55Yea tu server is down
kfar
September 15, 00:06Hi, Kruti, good morning, yeah it might take a couple of hours 🙁
I started the story kinda differently though
kfar
September 14, 22:46Server down at TU 🙁
strawberry
September 14, 22:51Really loved ur story at tu✌️ 🙂
kfar
September 14, 22:58Heyy thanx so much strawberry and good morning:D
strawberry
September 14, 23:54Gd mrng
unknown
September 14, 12:38Guys check telly updates kfar story is published as story drawn together u can read there from begining
Samiha
September 14, 12:42Hey Unknown, you are quite known to me… Ha ha… Can you please ptrovide with the link???
kfar
September 14, 22:50haha thanx for marketing my sory deary 😀
kfar
September 14, 22:51haha thanx for marketing my story deary 😀
zara
September 14, 12:15kfar, anaya,thena, where are you ? ?? plzz update your story buddies . I’m waiting.
strawberry
September 14, 12:11Plzzzz update dear @ Deepa ……I have school tmrw then I will sleep early tonite…..Plzzz update within the next 30 mins…..plzzz it’s a request
strawberry
September 14, 11:34please update Deepa
strawberry
September 14, 11:31☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
Deepa
September 15, 03:04Hi starw berry
sorry yar…yesterdy i could not update episode due to my mob,it get struck and switched of dr bleady mob,,,2dy till nw its working yaar…..vll try to update as soon as possible buddy….love alots dr…tc
strawberry
September 14, 11:31@deepa….I want epi 17 please
Samiha
September 14, 11:03@Clara: Really??? Then please provide with the link…..
Clara
September 14, 11:19http://www.tellyupdates.com/send-your-stories-articles-related-to-the-show-to-us/
@kfar,deepa,anaya,and all..Guys please post your stories there.
strawberry
September 14, 11:21Yes Clare please give us the link
strawberry
September 14, 11:24Thanx a ton Clara
swar
September 14, 10:19miss u manmarziyaan
Dipika
September 14, 08:57hi all deariesss!!! happiee to c u all here!!
Mandy
September 14, 08:29Heya ll !!!
Hey kfar ur really cool yaar !!
Hey renu ur too gud !!
hey samiha !!
Natasha
September 14, 08:46Hey mandy how r u?
Mandy
September 14, 10:21I m fine natasha hw r u n wr is ur story !!
Samiha
September 14, 11:02Hi Mandy! How is everything going??? I was thinking about you. Glad that you are here also…
deepa
September 14, 07:17Zara,clara,sheher,straw berry,nisha,and many others who liked my story…..thanks alot buddies…….lov alot…..keep enjoying drs
nisha
September 14, 07:54Deepa really genuinely loved the way you weaved a story.
Except here if you guys hang out somewhere else then please let me inform I also joined you all.
Mandy
September 14, 08:32Hey deepa ur story is really romantic yaar !! Keep it up !!
Clara
September 14, 10:40Hey deepa…now TU has started a new article specially for DYM fans…You can post your story there.
SO happy that TU listened to us. 🙂
deepa
September 14, 07:12Starts with arjun and radhika reaching farm house….arjun gets down frm his car and ask radhika to get down,bt radhika tells no,pls drop me in clg….arjun holds her hand and takes her out and lifts her in his arms and takes her inside….arjun put radhika down and ask her to take rest for sometime…..afttat v wll practice….radhika tells no,i cant stay here,,,drop me in clg,,,,orelse i will go by myself and start to walk towards the door,bt arjun locks the door and start to walk toward rads making her to fall on couch….arjun locks her arm around her and tells that….. U wont go anywhere till u dance properly…. Do u understand it babe….arjun goes to attend t call
Radhika is left thinking
Affsometime,arjun ask radhika to come upstairs,she goes and asusual they practice dance and they come closer to eachother….
arjun and radhika keeps on practicing,they forgot tat night has arrived….suddenly the power goesoff…just when,radhika and arjun came back to their world and realised it was ni8…arjun ask rads to wait and goes to get candles…..radhika gets scared due to dark….
Scene2
arjun brings candles and lights the whole room,radhika too helps him,both stare eachother and lights the room.it start to rain,radhika goes to balcony to enjy rain,arjun followe her to balcony and is mesmerised to c his love playing in rain,arjun cant able to take off his eyes frm her,he stares her like anything….and start to walk towards her.
Scene3
arjun touches rads shoulder,radhika turns and see him,there is a thunder,rads gets afraid and hugs him tightly…..arjuns hormones are terribly increasing…..rads breaks the hug and looks at him…his sexy eyes and hot breath make her to shiver and lose her senses.
Rads tries to ignore him and leave,arjun holds her hand pulls her towards him and lifts her,he carries her to bed,and put her in bes,he removes his shirt and looks at her.TERE MERE SONG PLAY IN BG.
PRECAP
arjun gets intimate with rads…
seher
September 14, 07:16OMG…..total romantic.!!!♡♡♡
nisha
September 14, 07:51Loved the way you weaved a story.
strawberry
September 14, 10:24wow!!! so romantic….great work deepa
Dipika
September 14, 22:32Deepa wht to say yaarrr…u hav marvelous skill of writing…became fan of yours….wht a story!! aradhika romance on high level…love ech n evry part….superbbbbbb…muhhhaa…
Mandy
September 15, 16:08Oooooo la la itna romance !! Love it yaar !! Cntinu dear !!